Thursday, 24 November 2016

Pitch Feedback

 
Points made in the pitch feedback
  • replica weapons and drugs are not permitted in the opening sequence.
  • there must be a member of the group acting in the film.
  • pitch presentation could have been more organized
  • the shooting schedule was very detailed
  • the title sequence idea was good but could be thought more deeply about to be more clear
  • the audience liked the idea of the voice over
  • include more evidence of locations and mise en scene
  • more detailed storyboard.

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